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Down the road I am walking
The birds and the dogs are talking
The bands and the stars are rocking
But I am just walking

I will not look behind me
For the pain or joy I might see
Of love, death, and the wealthy
Never will I look behind me

I shall walk all alone
On the blacktop grass and stone
There is no need to cry or moan
I am walking all alone

The birds are still singing their song
There is nothing that doesn’t belong
Nothing seems to be wrong
So I keep on walking, walking along
©2008-2009 ~borninstereo
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WOW, I found this one on my computer. I wrote it when I was in Sixth grade.

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jeebus. sixth? genius buds early...

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Wow, it sounds sorta like one of my older poems... I kinda gave up on rhyming a long time ago, but this is greatness. I :heart:s it, rhyming and all!

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:iconborninstereo:
yeah, in my maturity I have started leaning more towards freeverse style poetry, I remember when I thought all poems had to rhyme. Sometimes it just sounds better to rhyme though, it helps the flow.

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"When they ask you for credit, give them a branch
When they want you to get it, chew on the grass
When they want you to cry, leap into the sky
When they suck your mind, like a pigeon, you'll fly" - Beck - Cyanide Breath Mint
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Freeverse is just easier, I think; sometimes when I rhyme I sound immature, and I like poetry that sounds intelligent and flowing. But yes, rhyming does sometime help. :shrug:

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